Войти с Facebook
Забыли Ваш пароль? У меня нет счета
Ваша информация будет храниться в памяти только две недели.

Английский Письменные Упражнение (Все уровни)

курс 101, Раздел 1, Урок 5

Описание предметов

Инструкции: Опиши предметы, которые вы выучили на этом уроке. Используй положительные и отрицательные свойства. Напр. Пять домов. Два дома зеленые. Три дома не зеленые. Они черные.

mammamia's Упражнение: Средняя Оценка:
I am a studentin Gread Ten now .When I was very young I wished I could become a vet because I like animals. I think diseases is a way by which the nature can control the population.But to animals,especially the endanger ones,things are a little different.Then I found if I was just a vat,I can't help a large amount of animals especially wild ones,at that time I always spent some time watching TV program about the earth to see thoes animals which lived far away from me.And I admired Jane Goodall very much,I want to join WWF,to be a vounteer. As time went by,I still want to help animals but I bacame crazy about astronomy,at that time I was about twelve.I believe there must be U.F.O.and E.T. and I want to find them.Now at school,I like maths and physics and chemistry very much,(but I will never do experimental on animals such as little mince.)I can't say what I will become in the furture but I think nobody's dream is absurd.I wish good luck to everybody who wants to do good for our earth.
Выполнены больше года назад

Пожалуйста, войдите в систему, чтобы проверить это упражнение

Вход



Обзоры

  • Chynna
    Mochapoints: 107217  |  баллы учителя: 103536
    Выполнены больше года назад
    Правописание:
  • Chynna
    Mochapoints: 107217  |  баллы учителя: 103536
    I am a student in the tenth grade now. When I was very young I wished I could become a vet because I like animals. I think disease is a way by which nature can control the population of a species. But to animals, especially the endangered ones, things are a little different. Then I found that if I was just a vet, I wouldn't be able to help a large number of animals, especially wild ones. At that time, I always spent time watching TV programs about the earth to see those animals, which lived far away from me. And I admired Jane Goodall very much. I want to join WWF, to be a volunteer. As time went by, I still wanted to help animals, but I became crazy about astronomy, I was about twelve. I believed there must be U.F.O.'s and E.T.'s and I wanted to find them. Now at school, I like math, physics and chemistry very much, but I will never do experimental on animals such as little mice. I can't say what I will become in the future, but I think nobody's dream is absurd. I wish good luck to everybody who wants to do good for our earth. Please put a space after any punctuation mark.
    Выполнены больше года назад

Советы для Хороших Обзоров:

Будьте конкретны
  • Предоставьте полезные предложения и примеры.
  • Напишите больше, чем просто краткие комментарии, такие как “Хорошая работа” или “Нужно поработать".
Сделайте исправления
  • Используйте возможности редактирования, применяя зачёркивание, полужирный или цветной шрифт.
  • Используйте виртуальную клавиатуру, чтобы вставить специальные символы в свои обзоры.
Обучайте по образцам
  • Выполняя обзор упражнения на говорение, запишите ваш аудиокомментарий
  • Обратите внимание на правильное произношение и образцы по устной речи.