Describe an area in your city
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Используя новые слова из этого урока, опишите людную улицу в вашем городе. какие здания и строения находятся на ней? Где они находятся?
Английский Письменные Упражнение (Все уровни)
курс 201, Раздел 8, Урок 4
 RICHARD's Упражнение: | Средняя Оценка: |
Because of my profile picture, sometimes people misunderstand that I'm younger than my real age
I took the picture about three years ago and now I'm in my mid-thirties.
If you look up and down the picture, you'll find it's natural to think so.
In the picture, I have a round face.
I have my hair cut shortly and it's color is black.
My hair isn't parted but is handled like that of little boys.
And more, I wear a red colored casual shirts.
As you see, I almost don't have facial hair and actually I can count even the number of my beard now. It's a kind of inborn thing.
Telling the truth, I pleased to hear that I look young, but sometimes to be seen old as my age is the better especially when I'm in my business.
I took the picture about three years ago and now I'm in my mid-thirties.
If you look up and down the picture, you'll find it's natural to think so.
In the picture, I have a round face.
I have my hair cut shortly and it's color is black.
My hair isn't parted but is handled like that of little boys.
And more, I wear a red colored casual shirts.
As you see, I almost don't have facial hair and actually I can count even the number of my beard now. It's a kind of inborn thing.
Telling the truth, I pleased to hear that I look young, but sometimes to be seen old as my age is the better especially when I'm in my business.
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well done, Richard.. Your english is very good Выполнены больше года назад -
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well done, Richard.. Your english is very good Выполнены больше года назад -
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well done, Richard.. Your english is very good Выполнены больше года назад -
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very good !!! Выполнены больше года назад -
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The first few sentences were perfect, so I don't repeat them. Suggested corrections follow. I'm not sure what you mean by "I can count even the number of my beard now" My hair isn't parted but is styled like that of little boys. Futhermore, I wear red colored casual shirts. As you see, I almost don't have facial hair and actually I can count the number of hairs in my beard. It's a kind of genetic thing. To tell the truth, I am pleased to hear that I look young, but sometimes to be seen as old as my age is better especially in my business. Выполнены больше года назад -
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I'm sorry, in my previous post I said you needed to replace "inborn" with "genetic". I checked my dictionary, and "inborn" is indeed correct: "It's a kind of inborn thing". I should be more careful and check my dictionary more often. Выполнены больше года назад
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